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Flutters of Thought

Flutters of ThoughtI wish that I could wrap my wordsaround each fleeting thoughtthat flits and flutters through my mind....a moth that wont be caught.If only it would light awhileand rest its restless...

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ooo.. i loveeee this such a sweet lyrical piece of writing, Sue! Truly enjoyed~!~Alaura

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I was just fluttering by, Sue, and stopped to say how much this one pleases me.Merlin

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My heart flutters when I read such lyrical verse. Top marks, Sue!jtb

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Your sentiments are shared by me. I particularly like L1-4. Well said Sue. fran

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A beautiful sentiment gorgeously written, Sue. Superb stuff! I thoroughly enjoyed.Anyone can write of beauty -- of life, friendship, love everlasting -- but it is those rare, brave souls who dare to...

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Quote:I wish that I could wrap my wordsaround each fleeting thoughtthat flits and flutters through my mind....a moth that wont be caught.- I think you've proved that you can! Expressed with elegance...

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This is so lyrical and so sweet Sue...written with flawless form and poetic flair...truely enjoyed!

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Hi Heartsong7,Your exquisitely writ verse deftly details the perfect metaphor for poetry itself.The words are wont to take wing... in aimless seeming inane flight, as if a dream dared the light of...

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Yes...that's the key, isn't it...to capture a thought, and hold it with nothing but language...to paint the ideas that whirl through our minds...forever the dilemma of the writer...caught the idea...

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This is as good as it gets ,near perfect poetry Sue

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Sometimes fleeting thoughts dance just out of reach - other times, they make poetry such as this.

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Heartsong,I couldn't relate to you more.. it's often difficult to put thoughts into words, whether spoken or written. Loved this line: Id wrest the words to weave cocoons I think you put your thoughts...

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Dear Sue,From the perfect title to the last rhyme, you've merged fluttery thought with a spritely flow, is it ballad meter or iambic heptameter (?) to achieve a lyricism rarely...

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Oh my! this one completely got away from me.. I'm sorry to be so long in responding to your thoughtful comments. Many thanks to all of you.... your input means a lot to me.Ron, is this ballad or IH?...

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Sue, I really can't add anything to what has already been said - I agree with it all! It's such a delicate and graceful piece - I love it!

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Susan I can certainly relate, I love the breezy feel to this one, like cream on carrot cake, enjoyed!!!!!

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///a deft treatment of a subjectoften attempted and often overdone.the classic form is well used and smoothly filled out.a pleasure to read.carry on.neil.

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This is great! It romps right along with a good rhythm. I like the consistency of simile/metaphor of the cocoons and the unnamed fluttering (butterfly in my reading). Solid rhyming, solid craft. Be...

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